KydonAndWillow

@savannah_grace2009

Ok so first of allllll, sorry for replying an entire month late 😭

Second, I think Jonas made some really great points! I totally agree with him.

I’d also add that there’s a reason cliches and tropes exist–and that’s because they work. Oftentimes they can be overdone and end up boring and predictable, but they can also be…[Read more]

Aaaaah, I can’t believe how long I disappeared for! I got distracted with blender, and ignored this, but I want to come back! I’m posting this so now I have to do it or I’ll embarrass myself :p

I’m not gonna make the youtube one because it’s too much work hahaha

@savannah_grace209

Ah, I’ll have to listen to it !! *nod nod nod*

@whalekeeper @theducktator @esther-c

Umm guys I need some help.

I think my story has outgrown all the powers and stuff. it just makes it complicated!!

The more I read books nowadays there are a LOT of books out there similar to mine. Like, there are all the rich people with powers, and they have control over the people who don’t have powers.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @esther-c @grcr @others who remember my book

GUYSSSS

I found a song that is like the theme song of my Andromeda book

It’s called Commodity by Remedy Drive!! It fits sooo well

Guys I have failed XD

I fell off the face of the earth again!! I will post the links either today or tomorrow for sure hahaha I’m so sorry for the delay!!!

@loopylin

The board looks great!

Acharis

He wasn’t dead. That was good, at least.

Acharis found Iris’ gaze discomforting. The layer of wood over his face didn’t feel like enough protection as she appeared determined to bore holes through it with her eyes. He looked away and reminded himself that she could not see his irritation and fear. Not f…[Read more]

@loppylin

that is literally what they’re here for actually hehe

He anticipates unhelpfulness from everyone he meets lol.

Acharis

Acharis stared at the image projected in the basin. The land continued for miles in every direction with no end in sight, and it was filled with pointless corridors of stone and shrub, mostly leading to nowhere. The…[Read more]

@loopylin

By his planet’s measurement he’s only 19, which is something like 22-23 in Earth years, but I don’t know the exact conversion yet.

Acharis

Acharis stood frozen for a moment. Then he reached up and grasped the statue’s wrist, lowering her hand away from his mask.

“My mind. is not. fragile.” He said, punctuating the words and glaring…[Read more]

@loopylin

I’ll be praying.

sup dawgs

@jonas

Here’s the things I thought of after my first readthrough. They may be slightly random.

1. I think the worldbuilding and magic system is introduced in understandable amounts (though I already knew some things about the magic system so I may not be the best judge)

b. It’s very engaging to read and if I picked this up in a bookstore and…[Read more]